You articulate yourself very clearly and with express your ideas with confidence. When situating the passage try to place it in terms of plot instead of pages. You mention ‘near the end’, but could have better identified this as an integral instance of rising action. Otherwise this is a well structured introduction. Although gender plays a minor role in this text, I would stress that issues relating to power, social class, art and the artist are at the forefront of this story. Very good transitions between ideas and awareness of Munro’s writer’s craft. Overall, you provide some good analysis, and have a strong sense of Munro as writer, but could achieve greater accuracy and greater precision with a clearer sense of theme.
You articulate yourself very clearly and with express your ideas with confidence. When situating the passage try to place it in terms of plot instead of pages. You mention ‘near the end’, but could have better identified this as an integral instance of rising action. Otherwise this is a well structured introduction. Although gender plays a minor role in this text, I would stress that issues relating to power, social class, art and the artist are at the forefront of this story. Very good transitions between ideas and awareness of Munro’s writer’s craft. Overall, you provide some good analysis, and have a strong sense of Munro as writer, but could achieve greater accuracy and greater precision with a clearer sense of theme.
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